Illuminated_Sin (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} illuminated_sin) wrote in angienano, |
Quick note: In the beginning of 6, Arden's the one with the knot between his shoulders, yet a few paragraphs later you refer to Luka's shoulders tightening up again. o_O Either that or you transposed the "Luka gave Arden a quick look" and it should be "Arden gave Luka a quick look" instead.
I tried finishing it but my eyes keep shutting on me; I haven't slept well in 3 days. I'll have to finish reading when I wake up.
::squeezes you::
It's still great! :D
I tried finishing it but my eyes keep shutting on me; I haven't slept well in 3 days. I'll have to finish reading when I wake up.
::squeezes you::
It's still great! :D
